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Wednesday, June 29, 2016

happy wheels poem




1.  Dying             painfully


2.  flying       happily


3.  speeding             fastly


4. throwing       dangerously


5.  swinging       weirdly
6.  killing       lazely


7. bleeding       majorly


8.  smashing       amazingly


9.  Blowing up everywhere


10.  driving       badly

Happy drivers

3 comments:

  1. Hi koby, Your adverb poem is really cool. I really like all the interesting words you used like majorly. I think you need to use capital letters in your poem. Nice work Koby.

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  2. Hi koby, Your adverb poem is really cool. I really like all the interesting words you used like majorly. I think you need to use capital letters in your poem. Nice work Koby.

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  3. Hi Koby your poem is really cool and amazing. I like that you have been using verbs and adverbs. But everywhere is not an adverb.

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